4/2/15

The Super Croc

One morning, Ms.Deer went to the lake to get a nice drink. When she got there, she saw her good friends Mr. Fish and Mrs Hippo. 
Ms.Deer greeted, "How are you, Mr. Fish and Mrs. Hippo?"
They replied, "We are fine! Thank you."
Ms. Deer put her nose into the water to take a sip but suddenly a huge crdocodile opened his wide jaws and jumped out to get a piece of Ms. Deer.
Luckily, Ms. Deer escaped just in time! Ms. Deer and Mrs. Hippo ran far far away and started to think  of a plan to get that Super Croc out of the lake. 
After about 10 minutes, they had a very good plan. Mr. Fish got told what the plan was, so they all got to work. 
When one hour passed, everything was set. 
Ms. Deer caught Super Croc's attention and they were running to an old and dirty pond. Then Ms. Deer popped up a big balloon, and the Super Croc started to chase it off deep into the forest.
Super Croc never came back to the lake again.


This was an article Flower Sunny wrote during her class in Grade Two. She also took some notes as follows:
  • I like to learn about animals long ago. It makes me feel good to know about the past.
  • I can search Super Croc on Google and I can learn more about it.
  • I learned that Super Croc is VERY big.

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